This is how i changed and amended the script to try and give it more life then just some words on a page. I changed some of the vocabulary and some of the spacing and pauses to make it feel more natural, and it was easier to read this way.
The ending is a little naff but we thought that our script lacked anything interesting so we thought we would add a odd twist at the end. Although it would have sounded more professional if we said something like a 'heart attach' but it's a fun task so we just had a play.
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